DJ Jazzy Abe needs to star in his own comic. This 2nd re-write is even funnier than the 1st. Lotsa fun. You ougtha submit it to Marvel; they have been more open to this kind of tomfoolery in recent years (and always looking for the next excuse to re-print Kirby art that they already paid for 40 years ago) !
HAHA! I think Jack Kirby would have liked this. Nicely done sir